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After Rioku and Luriu meeting Lou's Family they have became really good friends. One day Lou payed a visit to Riokus
House.
Rioku:*opens the door* Hey lou^^
Rioku: who is it
Llou: my new kids
Lou; thanks
Luke: my sister is shy
Rioku: cute
Rioku: i wonder wheres luriu
everyone follows*
Luriu: *quickly turns and Runs to hug Rachel*
Rachel: *hugs back*
Lou; My other kids Luke and Lanna
Luke: Hi
Lou; thanks
Lanna: *shyly* Hi
Luriu: *smiles and shakes Lukes paw*
Luriu: ive been pretty busy
Luriu: does it feel good to be the older sibling
Rachel: They're a Hand full
Lou: *Looks at Rachel with a woried face* Rachel are you ok
Rachel: Yea...*pases out due to fattiuge*
Luriu: Rachel!!!!
Luriu: right *rushes her into the room and lays her on the bed*
Lou: if rachel passed out from that
Rioku: thats a handfull
Lou: give her some rest. Luriu stay in here if you want
Luriu: Ill watch her until she feels better
Lou: ok *walks out of the room*
Rioku: i hope she'll feel better soon
Lou: me too
All those Hours passed and Luriu Stayed by Rachels side until She
got Better.  a day passes and Rachel wakes up*
Rachel: Huh
Luriu: *sleeping in the chair next to the bed*
Rachel: *trys to get up and moans softly*
Luriu: *twitches ear* Huh
Rachel: Hey...
Luriu: Feeling any better
Rachel: No i cant movei am real sore in my legs
Rachel: and arms
Luriu: Oh no i better get your dad
Luriu:*gets Lou*
Lou: Yes...
Luriu: she cant move her arms and legs
Luriu: *starts crying a little*
Lou: *rushes to the room*
Lou: *looks over her body* Hmmmm
Luriu: will she be alright
Lou: Yeah she is just real sore thats all nothing to worry about
Luriu: thank god
Rachel: *scoots over a bit* Come here Luriu
Lou: well tell me if you need anything
Lou: *Leaves*
Luriu: ill be right here if you need anything
Rachel: Lay next to me please
Luriu: sure *lays next to Rachel hugs her*
Rachel: thats why i scoted over as far as i can
Rachel: I love you too
Luriu:*blushes*
Rachel: *turns her head and trys to kiss Luriu's cheek*
Luriu: *kisses*
Rachel: Thanks, arrrrrggg
Luriu: you alright
Rachel: yeah just sore
Rachel: *roles over and puts arm around Luriu* ARRRRGGGG, Hurts to move
Luriu: dont worry ill be here until your better
Rachel: *blushes*
Luriu: *blushes*
Rachel: *falls asleep with arm around Luriu*
Luriu:*falls asleep*
Luriu stayed by rachel's side until the next morning  and was hoping
That rachel feels better. *a few hours pass and rachel wakes up*
Rachel: *gets up* Hey i can move
Luriu: Thats great^^
Rachel: *climbs on top of Luriu and kisses him on the lips* thanks for staying by me
Luriu: no problem *hugs Rachel*
Rachel: *kisses him on the lips again*
Luriu: ^^ *blushes*
Rioku: *walks by* oh *walk Back*
Rachel: HA its ok Rioku were not doing anything
Luriu: *starts giggling*
Rioku: wheres Lou?
Rachel: he is not here
Rioku: oh i guess ill go gather som berries for lunch
Rioku: *walks outside*
Rachel: My dad's not here hmmm
Luriu: well you can stay here until he returns
Rachel: MMMMM ok
Rachel* kisses Luriu madly on the lips*
Luriu: *kisses her back*
Rachel: *continues kissing*
Luriu: *blushes*
Rachel: you blush to much
Luriu: yea ive never expierience this kind of emotions before
Rachel: what love
Luriu: yea
Rachel: me too
Luriu and Rachel had never expierenced this kind of emotion before.
It was very new to them but hey both grown fond to one another
Rioku:*walks in*
Rachel: Hi
Rioku: hey
Rachel: you find My dad
Rioku: sry not yet iwonder where is he
Rachel: he probably went home
Luriu: if you want i can walk you home
Rachel: i wana stay here with you
Luriu: sure
Rachel: *hugs Luriu*
Luriu:*hugs back*
Rachel: Well i stay in bed with you
Luriu: ok
Rioku: Lunch should be ready soon
Rachel: ok
Rachel: *kisses Luriu*
Luriu:*kissesback*
Rachel: Love you
Luriu: love you too
Luriu: if you feel anybetter wanna take a quick walk through the forest
Rachel: ok
Rachel: lets go
Luriu: ok
Luriu*gets up and walks with Rachel*
Luriu wanted to take Rachel on a walk to spend some time with her alone
abd she felt happy about that too.
Rachel: *looks at Luriu and smiles*
Luriu: *looks and smiles back*
Rachel: why did you wana walk
Luriu: get alittle fresh air and be with someone very special
Rachel: awww i love to walk with my boyfriend
Luriu: awwww thnks ^^
Rachel: no problem
Rachel: *kisses Luriu on the cheek*
Luriu:*kisses back
Rachel: wanaawatch the sunset
Luriu: sure
Rachel: *grabs Luriu's hand and runs up a hill that turns out to be a cliff*
Luriu:*sits down with rachel by his side*
Rachel: perfict spot
Rachel: *Looks endagarly into Luriu's eyes*
Luriu:*looks back*
Rachel: *kisses Luriu*
Luriu: *smiles and puts arm around rachel and watches the sunset
Luriu and Rachel are ther watching the sunset very peacefully and
they enjoyed being with eachother.
Rachel: *ears perk up*
Luke: Big sis
Luriu: hey luke
Luke: Hey Luriu
Lanna: big sister
Rachel: hey Lanna
Lanna: *sits in rachels lap*
Luke: *sits in between Luriu and Rachel*
Luriu: so what brings you guys up here
Luke: i figured that Rachel was here
Luke: so i came here
Luriu: im glad you guys came here. Look at the sunset its so beautiful
*sun goes down* After spending time with Rachel and her two ne siblings
Luriu was happy he got to share a beautiful sight with all of them
*They all watched the sun go down untill the riolus fall asleep*
Rachel: *smiles* Lets take them home
Luriu: sure
Luriu:*walks with luke and lanna and rachel home
*they arive at Lou's house"
Rachel: opens the door* Mom, dad
Lou and Laura: yes
Luriu: hello Laura and Lou
Lou and laura: hi
Rachel: we have two trobble makers to drop off
Luriu: well i better get going
Rachel: can i stay with you
Luriu: well okay^^
Lou and Laura: Yeah you can
Rachel: *goes home with Luriu*
Luriu: i love you rachel
Rachel: i love you too
Rachel and Luriu are Growing even more fond of one another
©2008-2009 ~LucariosUnited
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NICE! This is a good story like lucario lover makes! But not as good as her's but still very good!
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^^ well she writes stories with us now

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